Sunday, November 15, 2009

Smile

You there—

Raising your lips

Pinning them to your cheeks

They bulge and hide your eyes

Rows of white exposed

You ask me why

I do not do the same



You speak—

Here they are

Enjoy

This is to tell you I am content

I like life I like my life

It is good to me He is good to me

Whoever he is

I am lucky

And I am stable



And so—

With reluctance

Here are my white rows

My busting cheeks

My bright red encasement

Framing my ivory towers

Here is what is left of my sight

My pupils strain to peek over these rounds



And yet—

I feel these obstructed realms

Of light, these cradles of color

Say so much more in the way

They are held there

Then these perfect sets of precision

These lined up little beauties

Could ever get across

1 comment:

  1. I like your use of imagery. The diction is very consistent throughout the whole, and your voice is apparent. The ending is somewhat confusing however, i see a shift occur but it is hard to pinpoint what that shift is. can you make the ending clearer.

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